0:00 to 0:24 I think can be considered an intro, after which it then enters the build. Some songs are designed to have a more aggressive start and that's not a bad thing. It really does just comes down to a matter of style.
Sick. Man, how are you making these wubs? Serum? Very nice. However, my only gripe with the song is that I feel that there is a lack of an intro. But then again, my style is more methodical. Good work nonetheless!
(1 of 3) Sound Check Feedback on VOXEL’s track 5-Rampage:
A track with a lot of potential! A bit too busy here and there but we will sorten out what could be done here.
My feedback on the production:
*Intro works fine until 9 secs where the stab synths are introduced. I’d give them more reverb and pan them in order to make more room for the other sounds.
*At 39 seconds I’d skip the chords or stabs. Now it is a bit too much happening at the same time.
(3 of 3) Sound Check Feedback on VOXEL’s track 5-Rampage:
*I would lower the volume on most of the swirly stuff at the crescendo part so the drums are really ”in your face”
I would also make one more break at around 3.10 with a lot of air to then go back with full force after that.
Most of the time less is actually more. so all in all I would say that this track mostly needs to be cleaned up with focus on more clear elements. One at a time. Keep producing and remember to have fun!
I agree with Shards in his/her feedback (the part I understand, at least XD) But anyways, this is a good song. There is a lot of work in this. Good work, mate!
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Key Lime Canid
0:00 to 0:24 I think can be considered an intro, after which it then enters the build. Some songs are designed to have a more aggressive start and that's not a bad thing. It really does just comes down to a matter of style.
Perox?
Sick. Man, how are you making these wubs? Serum? Very nice. However, my only gripe with the song is that I feel that there is a lack of an intro. But then again, my style is more methodical. Good work nonetheless!
Voxel - (info in bio)
Thanks!
I Awake
Great. The key to better tracks are constant practice. Keep producing and keep posting your tracks for further feedback. Cheers.
I Awake
(1 of 3) Sound Check Feedback on VOXEL’s track 5-Rampage:
A track with a lot of potential! A bit too busy here and there but we will sorten out what could be done here.
My feedback on the production:
*Intro works fine until 9 secs where the stab synths are introduced. I’d give them more reverb and pan them in order to make more room for the other sounds.
*At 39 seconds I’d skip the chords or stabs. Now it is a bit too much happening at the same time.I Awake
(2 of 3) Sound Check Feedback on VOXEL’s track 5-Rampage:
*At the break at 1.39 I would most probably work on introduce some vocals, that could be repeated at the drop at 2.39.
*I would also choose to skip all percussion before 2.39 to create an anticipation for the ”release”.I Awake
(3 of 3) Sound Check Feedback on VOXEL’s track 5-Rampage:
*I would lower the volume on most of the swirly stuff at the crescendo part so the drums are really ”in your face”
I would also make one more break at around 3.10 with a lot of air to then go back with full force after that.
Most of the time less is actually more. so all in all I would say that this track mostly needs to be cleaned up with focus on more clear elements. One at a time. Keep producing and remember to have fun!
Rob The Beat
I agree with Shards in his/her feedback (the part I understand, at least XD) But anyways, this is a good song. There is a lot of work in this. Good work, mate!
little hollow
Nice,
Shards
lol