Katelyn, you're not a professional.
Your song is really good. Nice job!
you can't start your song with the big idea that's like in a party opening all the presents and then singing happy birthday. You have to get up to it you want to be on the edge of your seat
does anyone talk???
the chorus is too long at that point where there are no words at min 1:24
You could say showing up I'm gonna find love tonight also if you added some bass gutiar
I know someone who works with the radio and can help you with your song they could get your song famous they can also get it very popular. But first, it needs work just saying for famous material.