@Peaches, nah nah. I only get mad when people do it with the intention of not trying to help someone improve. Even if some of the things you said I disagree with, I still know that you're trying to help from your perspective, thanks :)
@Eden, yeh, I put a weird filter on it and forgot to change it. I'll "never forget" that little problem ;P
@arbor, yes. Static should've been quieter now that I've listened to it. Like such a small difference could have made it sound mixed better. :insert shrug
@Reptilian, @THEWICKEDUTOPIAN, @Dutch, @The Time Jumper, and TypicalFT, thank you! <3
Interesting. Well for starters some tracks start of slow and boring like most art. Kind of like books how it's kind of boring til you get to the nitty gritty stuff.
I was bored until the drums kicked in. Melody sounds familiar...🤔 I don't know if it's the tune or the instrument. Thing at 1:49, 2:02 and 2:16 is kinda scary. It made my heart... beat differently. 1:50 to the end might sound better with some chromatic percussion or something. It just seems a little empty/bare for being the last part of the song. I rarely smile upon abrupt endings and in this track, I find it especially repulsive. Good track overall. I'd say that the first half is definetly the better half. That's my favorite part. Btw, I listened w/out headphones.
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prod. inhale
already listened on spotify, followed u, and added it to a playlist. great track
little hollow
@focus, thanks matey :D
@Peaches, nah nah. I only get mad when people do it with the intention of not trying to help someone improve. Even if some of the things you said I disagree with, I still know that you're trying to help from your perspective, thanks :)
Peachesꕥ (inactive)
@Voxel You're right. @little hollow Thanks, I was afraid that you'd be mad at me.
focus
i'm listening to it on deezer!
little hollow
Lol
Voxel - (info in bio)
i dont think repulsive is the right word your looking for. The ending was abrupt but thats not repulsive
little hollow
@Eden, yeh, I put a weird filter on it and forgot to change it. I'll "never forget" that little problem ;P
@arbor, yes. Static should've been quieter now that I've listened to it. Like such a small difference could have made it sound mixed better. :insert shrug
@Reptilian, @THEWICKEDUTOPIAN, @Dutch, @The Time Jumper, and TypicalFT, thank you! <3
little hollow
Thanks for the feedback too, was strange, but I can understand the disliking of some of my choices :)
little hollow
Interesting. Well for starters some tracks start of slow and boring like most art. Kind of like books how it's kind of boring til you get to the nitty gritty stuff.
As for the melody, highly inspired by this track https://soundation.com/user/Puddles/track/empty-streets (The sudden stop at the end as well)
I'm sorry you found the ending repulsive though lol, but I liked it in the end and am happy with the end result of the track.
Also, you should probably listen with headphones or something to that effect, creates a better experience.
Peachesꕥ (inactive)
I was bored until the drums kicked in. Melody sounds familiar...🤔 I don't know if it's the tune or the instrument. Thing at 1:49, 2:02 and 2:16 is kinda scary. It made my heart... beat differently. 1:50 to the end might sound better with some chromatic percussion or something. It just seems a little empty/bare for being the last part of the song. I rarely smile upon abrupt endings and in this track, I find it especially repulsive. Good track overall. I'd say that the first half is definetly the better half. That's my favorite part. Btw, I listened w/out headphones.