Also i liked your song.
The sefton ate followa every body the is cool man by way
sick music. LOVE IT!! please make another
@DonutAssassin I think you're right, i'll try and put your thoughts into consideration if I decide to do another version of this song.
@Seftonate I probably did
I think you may have overdid it on the reverb.
The drums after that audio sample bothers me a little, and the drums as the melody plays needs to be louder, and add more depth to the song over all. It sounds like you depend on audio samples, so use less of that and more normal channels. You can do a lot without audio samples. You still can use them, but don't depend too much on them.