till the end improved 1.0

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As I said in other song, try to keep to a consistent tempo and style. Currently, everything sounds too out of place, don't be afraid to use a sound and stick with it for a majority of the song! Let me know how you do and if you need any more help

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cool this is good, you improved

wow

i need followers lol

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cool.