This is pretty good bro! If I were you, I would shorten up the into, add more drums, and some hi hats, it's not always necessary, but it's a staple of Trap, so I would consider it. But other that that, it was pretty good.
@PhantomTracks Thank you so much!! Strings are for sure my favorite instrument to use. They just convey such a range of emotions. And thanks for telling me what I should improve on. You are one of the best reviewers on my tracks! @Oozie454 Yeah, I gotcha. I probably should've worked on the percussion a little more. Thanks for your feedback!
Dang, You be ahead of most people on here. The drums felt a bit under powering but the melody is amazing. If you hadn't said you never listen to trap, after hearing this I would've thought you did. Btw, Are strings your favorite instrument to use? It seems like you always use them and very well at that. P.S. Contrary to LIL-R I didn't really feel a need for closed hi hats. As for the bass I could take it or leave it at its current volume. However I do think the kick should be louder. Very good work.
That feedback was greatly appreciated! Just saying, though, that this was not meant to be a lengthy track, but it was when I started, so that's the reason for the long intro.
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ChordsBoy
Hey everyone! I just finished retrying this song! Thanks for all of your feedback, and I hope this is a little better :) https://soundation.com/user/ChordsBoy/track/second-attempt-at-trap
ChordsBoy
Thanks for that feedback! I definitely understand what you're getting at, and I'll try to improve on that in my future tracks! Thanks again :D
5am (Formally DJ Echo)
This is pretty good bro! If I were you, I would shorten up the into, add more drums, and some hi hats, it's not always necessary, but it's a staple of Trap, so I would consider it. But other that that, it was pretty good.
ChordsBoy
Thanks!
Mr.Universe
the song good. keep it up
ChordsBoy
@PhantomTracks Thank you so much!! Strings are for sure my favorite instrument to use. They just convey such a range of emotions. And thanks for telling me what I should improve on. You are one of the best reviewers on my tracks! @Oozie454 Yeah, I gotcha. I probably should've worked on the percussion a little more. Thanks for your feedback!
Ooz!e454 (Using the studio limitedly)
increase that drums
SoulessAroun'
Dang, You be ahead of most people on here. The drums felt a bit under powering but the melody is amazing. If you hadn't said you never listen to trap, after hearing this I would've thought you did. Btw, Are strings your favorite instrument to use? It seems like you always use them and very well at that. P.S. Contrary to LIL-R I didn't really feel a need for closed hi hats. As for the bass I could take it or leave it at its current volume. However I do think the kick should be louder. Very good work.
ChordsBoy
That feedback was greatly appreciated! Just saying, though, that this was not meant to be a lengthy track, but it was when I started, so that's the reason for the long intro.
UnicornMan
I think the intro was too long. it took up 1 minute of your song. the rest of it was AWESOME.