Workin On A Melody ( 2nd Update )

Interesting! A little odd compositionally, but I enjoy the creativity. Keep practicing!

I agree with @Hijack it is good just the simple doesn't song right to me (change that to piano with FX)

Thanks for the feedback! It is really apppreciated... And I might change up that simple

I like this. And that mono. But, I don't know if I like that Simple.... Maybe change it up a bit or somethin'.