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TWISTED THOUGHTZ
over 7 years ago

i dont see wats so good about it No offense!!!!

TAGGEST
almost 8 years ago

thx

Kracked Ekho / illRipper
almost 8 years ago

not bad man

Pooch
almost 8 years ago

sweet track

M-possible
almost 8 years ago

lots of creativity in it.

JR quit
almost 8 years ago

it seems like some sounds are out of pitch, but it's a good start. the first two beginning synths sound pretty good

Dr. Doomsday
almost 8 years ago

You got a wide variety of samples in there, which is definitely good to avoid unnecessary repetition, but the problem is that many of them don't go together well, and the ones that do are lost by shuffling immediately to a different sound. Shifting immediately to a different instrument creates a jarring effect that, if overdone, can lead to a loss in coherence to the song; i.e. it don't flow good. My advice would be to stick to a few sounds to begin with, let them repeat for a bit to create a rhythm, and transition over time to similar sounds. A MIDI instrument acting as a beacon could help.

TAGGEST
almost 8 years ago

this is the first track to the 2nd album so dont say its horrible right from the start its only a preview but feel free to say what you think i should add

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