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Keylime Pie
7 months ago

...Colbreakz, I can recognize their names, but having only listened to each about 2 or so times, I can't actually recall how their music sounded, so any resemblance was not intentional. I appreciate the feedback nonetheless and I don't mind the comments. I don't see it as harmful spam or anything, so I don't feel any need to delete them (I even like to keep my soundation notifications because I like how it is presented on the side like a timeline and not some pesky red bubble/tag with a number). Woo, was this a lengthy response.

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Keylime Pie
7 months ago

...chords should be prominent and sustained. Had to reestablish a beat to add buildup and revert back to single chord structure to connect to the main part of song. 3:29 is just a reiteration of 1:10 and the following part a reprise of the other's following part, but with a reorganization of how parts enter, with the addition of extra ornaments. With regards to clipping, I remember soundation used to have a nice little visualizer thingy next to the tempo/time signature that made clipping easy to gauge and idk what happened to it. I'm not an avid nor regular listener of Tokyo Machine and...

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Keylime Pie
7 months ago

@INFINITE Thanks for the feedback, regardless of it being 10 comments and consuming a page. For the most part, when I make a song I actually don't consider what part is the drop, rather just a sequence of adding, removing, or changing parts. But I guess the part, not double time, but the halving of phrase length of some parts, then the following part has melodious parts and actual chord changes. The midsection arp is based off of the last few notes of the previous part. I was considering cutting the chord lengths in half, but to me it felt the chords would change too soon, and that the...

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Keylime Pie
7 months ago

INFINITE's Feedback
1 this is great. im not even at the drop yet.
2 oh, im at the drop now. its clipping, and seems kinda cluttered.
3 ooh, i like this part after the drop. nicee. still sounds clipping/
4 im in the second half now. arp much?
5 im getting hints of spoopyness and dubstep
6 second drop. colbreaks much? This is gonna be featured.
7 oooh 4:10 is Tokyu Machine
8 4:30 kinda clipping, but its colbreakz again.
9 And... Cue the end!
10 feel free to deleta all of those. its my entire feedback for the entire song. I shouldve just summed this up into 1 comment

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Unique Alias
7 months ago

feel free to deleta all of those. its my entire feedback for the entire song. I shouldve just summed this up into 1 comment

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Unique Alias
7 months ago

And... Cue the end!

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Unique Alias
7 months ago

4:30 kinda clipping, but its colbreakz again.

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Unique Alias
7 months ago

oooh 4:10 is Tokyu Machine

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Unique Alias
7 months ago

second drop. colbreaks much? This is gonna be featured.

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Unique Alias
7 months ago

im getting hints of spoopyness and dubstep

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