i'm not writing this to let you down, i'm writing this because, in the almost non good parts of your track, i saw some talent that need to come out. two big advices are; try to have a structure on your track, try to make an intro then build-up then a drop and try to create some melodic progressions. if you want you can pm me if you want some more help
the music is kinda horrible but i think u got some talent, i dont know why. u started really good but at the 15 second u made a terrible bit, its not even sync. i can see u used some effects of soundation and when u do that u have to look to the tempo (or bpm) of your track and the effects you use, they have to be the same. then at 48 you make some random sounds that ruin the song. at 1:25 u have that pad or pluck that doenst sound good. you got a lot of problems in your track and you really need to fix them.
Comments
Logan Mars
i'm not writing this to let you down, i'm writing this because, in the almost non good parts of your track, i saw some talent that need to come out. two big advices are; try to have a structure on your track, try to make an intro then build-up then a drop and try to create some melodic progressions. if you want you can pm me if you want some more help
Logan Mars
the music is kinda horrible but i think u got some talent, i dont know why. u started really good but at the 15 second u made a terrible bit, its not even sync. i can see u used some effects of soundation and when u do that u have to look to the tempo (or bpm) of your track and the effects you use, they have to be the same. then at 48 you make some random sounds that ruin the song. at 1:25 u have that pad or pluck that doenst sound good. you got a lot of problems in your track and you really need to fix them.