You have some clashing keys in here, even though the BPM matches. It sounds like several songs being played on multiple devices at once. About 50 seconds in, the new sound makes it seem like a new song. The same happens again at 1 minute. Review your comments from your previous publication, and you will notice the same concerns were mentioned. Had you only published 1 of the almost 4 different songs, you would have a solid track meeting all criteria. There are a lot of promising portions to what you have created. Keep going just for fun! :)
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Smerkalot
You have some clashing keys in here, even though the BPM matches. It sounds like several songs being played on multiple devices at once. About 50 seconds in, the new sound makes it seem like a new song. The same happens again at 1 minute. Review your comments from your previous publication, and you will notice the same concerns were mentioned. Had you only published 1 of the almost 4 different songs, you would have a solid track meeting all criteria. There are a lot of promising portions to what you have created. Keep going just for fun! :)