i think it fits well into what it's intended to be tbh. the off key bass line threw me off as well, but i think that kinda helps fit it into the creepy aesthetic. i don't think i have much room to say what's good and what isn't (after all, half my tracks are trash and the other half is burning trash), but i do like it. could perhaps be better if there was more variation as others have said, but this is all a matter of personal taste. keep on making bro!
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Eden Pigeon ♪
It is slightly repetitive, and I feel that automation should have been used (do to swyper being in possession of an Intro - level account)
Cheap flights
Also I agree with shards
Cecil G.
Hey! This is really good!!! You should send this to whatever music making places or idk.
Cheap flights
The piano is really good
atomicrenegadeofc
Really good!
BROFIS
swyper has some better tracks
Noise Byte
i think it fits well into what it's intended to be tbh. the off key bass line threw me off as well, but i think that kinda helps fit it into the creepy aesthetic. i don't think i have much room to say what's good and what isn't (after all, half my tracks are trash and the other half is burning trash), but i do like it. could perhaps be better if there was more variation as others have said, but this is all a matter of personal taste. keep on making bro!
Shards
idk, its really repetitive and the bass is off-key in some parts
little hollow
Well you definitely achieved it :)
Swyper
and just BTW, i was going for a slow, eerie vibe