You should make the song a little bit louder as it is kind of hard to hear other melodies.
The song is much too quiet in the beginning. I would stick to only one of the 2 melodic clips you have near the end. You may want to introduce one sooner as well. A great deal of the middle of the song is a bit too repetitive.
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prettyfantabulous
You should make the song a little bit louder as it is kind of hard to hear other melodies.
Smerkalot
The song is much too quiet in the beginning. I would stick to only one of the 2 melodic clips you have near the end. You may want to introduce one sooner as well. A great deal of the middle of the song is a bit too repetitive.