Nice lyrics, and sounded like you really put emotion into the rapping. The only thing I would work on is the beat and the flow of the lyrics. I don't know if you're going for the odd (sort of Hopsin) style, but you gotta make sure your lyrics and the beat match up when you rap. Other than that, awesome work dude!
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cthegwood6943
The voice in this soundtrack is so fucking sick, i love deep voices :) keep it up!
dead.
This is the very first song ive heard and its probably the best.
DJ K
Love it. Do you DJ for any clubs?
BASS4ROG
i'll admit tho that the last two "Just the beginnings" were a little off ill fix that when i drop the music video fosho
BASS4ROG
they match up perfectly what are u talking about?
Big Roshi
Nice lyrics, and sounded like you really put emotion into the rapping. The only thing I would work on is the beat and the flow of the lyrics. I don't know if you're going for the odd (sort of Hopsin) style, but you gotta make sure your lyrics and the beat match up when you rap. Other than that, awesome work dude!
Skeptik
I respect your work
Audial
he's responding to chris' ridiculous comment
BASS4ROG
Snow fox who and what are u talking about???
Triskelight
If you want to be 'real', you should type like you have a real brain. Just my personal opinion. I think you're just fine at this, BASS4ROG.