I mean the piano. You should also try carrying it through the song instead of only having it at one part
I can give it a try haha But my problem is understanding what you believe to be the melody.
I like the concept but I think that the melody should be a little more planned out and that on the piano, you should lower the low chords that you have now and bring them down an octave. You could also take the high notes and bring them up an octave or two. Usually I try to stay away from mid tones because they sound a bit ugly when by themselves.