I can hear the loops you made, and even if you didn't actually use them and simply imitated them, they don't work in the song, otherwise, I like the beginning, but one thing you should really consider is that it's much easier to make a song in key if you REALLY don't use loops
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No Name
thx i will try to improve by making a new better track. thx for the feedback though
nukt
pretty sure 00:17 is a loop though but you got a start on original music i guess
Katze
I can hear the loops you made, and even if you didn't actually use them and simply imitated them, they don't work in the song, otherwise, I like the beginning, but one thing you should really consider is that it's much easier to make a song in key if you REALLY don't use loops