Good buildup of sounds from the beginning, from melody till the coming in of rhythms at 00:12.
Suggestion: At 00:26, thicken the texture (number of sounds) instead of reducing it to the rhythm part. Use a loud and catchy melody after 00:26 to buildup the sound and bring up the energy of the song more. Alternatively, shorten the rhythm part from 00:26 to 00:33 and come in with a thick texture (like the chorus of a song with all the parts together).
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tanwensiu
Good buildup of sounds from the beginning, from melody till the coming in of rhythms at 00:12. Suggestion: At 00:26, thicken the texture (number of sounds) instead of reducing it to the rhythm part. Use a loud and catchy melody after 00:26 to buildup the sound and bring up the energy of the song more. Alternatively, shorten the rhythm part from 00:26 to 00:33 and come in with a thick texture (like the chorus of a song with all the parts together).