Good choice of melody and rhythm, the sounds complement each other well. Transition to the next section at 00:07 was smooth, as the tempo (speed), beat and mood between the two sections are similar.
At 00:15 there is an attempt to smoothen the transition for a new melody using fade in, however the switch is still a bit sudden.
Suggestion: Include a short rhythm section before introducing a new melody at 00:15 that has similar tempo and energy level as before that. A rhythmic part without melody prepares the listeners for a new melody (the two melodies are in different keys)
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tanwensiu
Good choice of melody and rhythm, the sounds complement each other well. Transition to the next section at 00:07 was smooth, as the tempo (speed), beat and mood between the two sections are similar. At 00:15 there is an attempt to smoothen the transition for a new melody using fade in, however the switch is still a bit sudden. Suggestion: Include a short rhythm section before introducing a new melody at 00:15 that has similar tempo and energy level as before that. A rhythmic part without melody prepares the listeners for a new melody (the two melodies are in different keys)