Good start! Your A section works great. I recommend cutting one of the sounds in your B section, it's fighting with the other sounds. Lastly, your C section needs a melody (synth line or instrument part). Change those things and you'll be on the right track!
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Lantz Beatz
Good start! Your A section works great. I recommend cutting one of the sounds in your B section, it's fighting with the other sounds. Lastly, your C section needs a melody (synth line or instrument part). Change those things and you'll be on the right track!