Good introduction with one rhythm coming in first and the second layering on top of the first. 3rd rhythm coming in at 00:09 could be adjusted such that it starts on the 1st beat (multiples of 4), now it is starting on the 2nd beat of 4 counts and feel slightly out of place.
Suggestion: After introducing rhythm and melody separately, try combining both melody and rhythm at 00:20 for more variety of texture (number of sounds: thin/thick)
Subsequent introduction of new rhythms and melodies; try using fade in to smoothen the flow of the song in general.
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tanwensiu
Good introduction with one rhythm coming in first and the second layering on top of the first. 3rd rhythm coming in at 00:09 could be adjusted such that it starts on the 1st beat (multiples of 4), now it is starting on the 2nd beat of 4 counts and feel slightly out of place. Suggestion: After introducing rhythm and melody separately, try combining both melody and rhythm at 00:20 for more variety of texture (number of sounds: thin/thick) Subsequent introduction of new rhythms and melodies; try using fade in to smoothen the flow of the song in general.