songplay.

Your introduction is very interesting--I like the juxtaposition between the child's voice and the ominous keyboard melody! You could align the transition a bit better. I think your dynamic balance between loops is excellent. There is something understated about your music, it is very atmospheric--like an undercurrent of energy that mutates. The ending is abrupt--I think you should keep mutating and then have a coda that gives your piece some closure. Think about your song as telling a story, or portraying an emotion or a person. Remember the superhero!! --Mrs. J