Ms. Lantz
about 4 years ago

Good start, Nathan. It sounds like you have the same beat/drum part running through the whole piece? If this is true, I'd keep it for one of your sections, and then delete it from the others. Then, add new rhythms to the sections that need them. These are pretty crazy melodies, so try to find a more simple drum sound to balance it out. Nice work so far, if it sounds good to your ear, keep it; If it doesn't change it. Good luck!