Great work! Your A section is solid. I LOVE your B section, but I would cut it a bit, you know, make it shorter but keep all the sounds. Your C section is interesting, but I would probably cut the first half of it completely and add a rhythm to it. Don't get me wrong, the whole C section is cool, but I think you did a better job arranging the second half of it. With these corrections you are on your way to an A plus project!
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Nick.MSMP
Nice Song Mariah!!!!
Lantz Beatz
Great work! Your A section is solid. I LOVE your B section, but I would cut it a bit, you know, make it shorter but keep all the sounds. Your C section is interesting, but I would probably cut the first half of it completely and add a rhythm to it. Don't get me wrong, the whole C section is cool, but I think you did a better job arranging the second half of it. With these corrections you are on your way to an A plus project!
Julie Bear
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