Good choice of sound for the introduction,
0:07 the coming in of other sounds is very sudden, sudden switch to new melody and bass/accompaniment part (Suggestion: Use fade in, and check the beat number-usually in multiples of 4, continuity of the sound heard in the beginning could have better flow in the song)
Sudden thinning of texture at 0:16 and 0:19 from a big and upbeat sound (Suggestion: Continue high energy level, transit in between the 1st big section and the 2nd big section using similar sounds ie similar beats, similar key)
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tanwensiu
Good choice of sound for the introduction, 0:07 the coming in of other sounds is very sudden, sudden switch to new melody and bass/accompaniment part (Suggestion: Use fade in, and check the beat number-usually in multiples of 4, continuity of the sound heard in the beginning could have better flow in the song) Sudden thinning of texture at 0:16 and 0:19 from a big and upbeat sound (Suggestion: Continue high energy level, transit in between the 1st big section and the 2nd big section using similar sounds ie similar beats, similar key)