Good variation of texture (number of sounds), there is a buildup of sounds in the beginning as they come in one by one.
Suggestion: Straight after this section, there can be thick texture (like the chorus of song, all parts play together). This is because at 00:17 there is a drop in volume (thinning of texture) after building up from the start till 00:17.
Work on the length of the song (minimum 1 minute)
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tanwensiu
Good variation of texture (number of sounds), there is a buildup of sounds in the beginning as they come in one by one. Suggestion: Straight after this section, there can be thick texture (like the chorus of song, all parts play together). This is because at 00:17 there is a drop in volume (thinning of texture) after building up from the start till 00:17. Work on the length of the song (minimum 1 minute)