In the beginning of the song, there seems to be 2 different sounds that contradict each other, one melody and the other a single note bass part.
Good choice of sounds at 00:14 and 00:20, the melody and rhythm parts complement each other very well. The section following that at 00:31 is a bit sudden, change of mood, energy level, rhythm and tempo (speed) is too fast.
Suggestion: Switch the sections behind at 00:39 around, so that the change of mood is gradual to make the flow of the song better.
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tanwensiu
In the beginning of the song, there seems to be 2 different sounds that contradict each other, one melody and the other a single note bass part. Good choice of sounds at 00:14 and 00:20, the melody and rhythm parts complement each other very well. The section following that at 00:31 is a bit sudden, change of mood, energy level, rhythm and tempo (speed) is too fast. Suggestion: Switch the sections behind at 00:39 around, so that the change of mood is gradual to make the flow of the song better.