Good combination of melody and rhythm at 00:16, created an upbeat feel. Same melody and rhythm continued till the end, where it ended a bit too suddenly.
Suggestion: Introduce some new melodies and rhythms so that there is variation in volume and sound (not the same volume and sound throughout the entire song). Work on the ending so that it is less sudden and not in the middle of the melody.
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tanwensiu
Good combination of melody and rhythm at 00:16, created an upbeat feel. Same melody and rhythm continued till the end, where it ended a bit too suddenly. Suggestion: Introduce some new melodies and rhythms so that there is variation in volume and sound (not the same volume and sound throughout the entire song). Work on the ending so that it is less sudden and not in the middle of the melody.