really cool layering of ideas, the drums are really interesting, did you make them or are they samples? the middle section is a bit weird to begin with, might want to make the transition neater, In my opinion I think you should use on two or three ideas in a song or it doesn't make much sense (too many different samples) and structurely I would always return to my beginning idea near the end or something, might want to do that with your next song. but its not bad at all
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Mr.Right
thankyou every1
coolmo1234
it is ok better than i could do!!!!
JDonaldson
Like it (y) It fits perfectly to R&B tune.
Audial
really cool layering of ideas, the drums are really interesting, did you make them or are they samples? the middle section is a bit weird to begin with, might want to make the transition neater, In my opinion I think you should use on two or three ideas in a song or it doesn't make much sense (too many different samples) and structurely I would always return to my beginning idea near the end or something, might want to do that with your next song. but its not bad at all