Good dark rhythm intro. I like that melodic bass line. You layer in each percussion sound very well--(that's timbre, btw) Your A section is a bit long, too much of a good thing can get boring. Great transition into the B section!!! You used elements of the intro, so it was seamless. The A section should be match the length of the B section and be in proportion. Nice coda. Make it a little longer and less of an abrupt cut off at the end. --Mrs. J
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lj0808
Good dark rhythm intro. I like that melodic bass line. You layer in each percussion sound very well--(that's timbre, btw) Your A section is a bit long, too much of a good thing can get boring. Great transition into the B section!!! You used elements of the intro, so it was seamless. The A section should be match the length of the B section and be in proportion. Nice coda. Make it a little longer and less of an abrupt cut off at the end. --Mrs. J