00:07 melody came in loud and a bit sudden as the previous section is relatively quiet, rhythm coming in at 00:18 is slightly overpowered as the melody is too loud.Suggestion: Lower down the volume of the melody, or do a fade in, or add the rhythm in the first section before 00: 07. 00:37 rhythm is slightly slower than melody, choose another rhythm?
00:46 good strategy in using fade out to transit into a new section, can perhaps make the fade out longer, or the next section fade in to smoothen the transition more. Work on the ending as well.
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00:07 melody came in loud and a bit sudden as the previous section is relatively quiet, rhythm coming in at 00:18 is slightly overpowered as the melody is too loud.Suggestion: Lower down the volume of the melody, or do a fade in, or add the rhythm in the first section before 00: 07. 00:37 rhythm is slightly slower than melody, choose another rhythm? 00:46 good strategy in using fade out to transit into a new section, can perhaps make the fade out longer, or the next section fade in to smoothen the transition more. Work on the ending as well.