Great start! Your A sections could stand to be a little longer, they should be the main focus of the song. Your B section sounds cool, but is also too short. Stretch the sounds out a bit. Also, both your A and B sections don't have a melody (a line you could sing). Try adding a synth line to each of those sections. Your C section works great! One last thing, I'd make your transitions shorter or cut them altogether. Right now they just sound like they are different sections. Good luck, see me if you need help.
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Lantz Beatz
Great start! Your A sections could stand to be a little longer, they should be the main focus of the song. Your B section sounds cool, but is also too short. Stretch the sounds out a bit. Also, both your A and B sections don't have a melody (a line you could sing). Try adding a synth line to each of those sections. Your C section works great! One last thing, I'd make your transitions shorter or cut them altogether. Right now they just sound like they are different sections. Good luck, see me if you need help.