Good buildup of texture (number of sounds) in the introduction, 00:04 the introduction of another new melody is a bit sudden (Suggestion: fade in?)
0:31 continuing the rhythm and melody from the previous section could be better in building up the texture of the song towards a climax (ie chorus)
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tanwensiu
Good buildup of texture (number of sounds) in the introduction, 00:04 the introduction of another new melody is a bit sudden (Suggestion: fade in?) 0:31 continuing the rhythm and melody from the previous section could be better in building up the texture of the song towards a climax (ie chorus)