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Ms. Lantz
about 4 years ago

Great job Karli! I think your A section was the best; it had a melody, a rhythm and an extra sound or two. I would make your transition from A to B a little shorter, and cut your transition from C back to A altogether. Your C section is cool enough! I also might cut out one or two of the sounds in your B Section, but extend one of your favorite ones. This way, your B section sounds more like one section, not pieces of a couple sections. This is a wonderful rough draft, keep up the good work!

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