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Ms. Lantz
about 4 years ago

While your music is definitely creative, I don't hear the ABACA pattern. One section, the A section, should repeat itself in the song. I do really like the ghostly sounds in the middle, I'd use that as your B section. The rest of the song just sounds like MANY different sections. Pick your three favorite parts and use them to guide you. If you need my help, ask!

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