Brutal? I am as brutal as they come. The track needs some work with the a drum beat, preferably organic (acoustic even). I am digging the sound and, repitetion must be handled right. You have that part down. Now try and challenge yourself with by mixing up the lead and making it crazy lol. I am not the best on here because Joe Bobby has me beat LOL, however, I have an excellent ear for music. Music is my passion. :) Keep up the great work, buddy~
you want BRUTAL honesty, i'll give you BRUTAL honesty. pretty decent actually. atleast you understand repitition cause some of the people here really don't understand repitition only a certain few can be unrepititive and still sound good, but this track has quite a decent sense of repitition really especailly in that beat. i reckon your notes on your wub machine needs work though. KIRBY AND A CAREBEAR RIPPING THE EYES OUT OF THE TELETUBBIES SO THEY HAVE A PLACE TO PISS IN. told you i'll be brutal.
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Johhny Guitar
Thanks guys!! Lol
平和の島
Brutal? I am as brutal as they come. The track needs some work with the a drum beat, preferably organic (acoustic even). I am digging the sound and, repitetion must be handled right. You have that part down. Now try and challenge yourself with by mixing up the lead and making it crazy lol. I am not the best on here because Joe Bobby has me beat LOL, however, I have an excellent ear for music. Music is my passion. :) Keep up the great work, buddy~
Oozzie
you want BRUTAL honesty, i'll give you BRUTAL honesty. pretty decent actually. atleast you understand repitition cause some of the people here really don't understand repitition only a certain few can be unrepititive and still sound good, but this track has quite a decent sense of repitition really especailly in that beat. i reckon your notes on your wub machine needs work though. KIRBY AND A CAREBEAR RIPPING THE EYES OUT OF THE TELETUBBIES SO THEY HAVE A PLACE TO PISS IN. told you i'll be brutal.