Ms. Lantz
about 4 years ago

Hey JJ! Good start. One thing I would fix, I hear your sections as ABCA. Make sure to copy and paste another A section between B and C (A B A C A). Next, I hear a definite beat and melody in your A section, awesome...Now put a melody with your B and C sections to give your piece some direction. I hear different rhythms, but you really need to have a melody line (synth part or instrument part) to make your sections stand out. Ask me if you need help, good luck!