Good combination of sounds in the beginning, melody and a rhythm that is not too loud and can be heard in the background. Transition to another section at 00:21 gets a little repetitive and monotonous.
Suggestion: Add a rhythm part to the section at 00:21 that is louder, more upbeat and higher energy level than in the beginning. Choose another rhythm at 00:54, the current rhythm seems not matching to the beat.
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tanwensiu
Good combination of sounds in the beginning, melody and a rhythm that is not too loud and can be heard in the background. Transition to another section at 00:21 gets a little repetitive and monotonous. Suggestion: Add a rhythm part to the section at 00:21 that is louder, more upbeat and higher energy level than in the beginning. Choose another rhythm at 00:54, the current rhythm seems not matching to the beat.