This piece is really simple, but clean. I really like your choice of song! The only two things I think needs more work are the time in which each note is played and the plain-ness of it. This piece sounds a little messy, in the sense that the notes were not spaced evenly, and in the original song, there is a lot of other instruments and sounds played in the background-try adding some of those! Either way, I really enjoyed listening to your piece, and the title gave me a good laugh!
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julia-gonzalezcuyas7308
This sound is like the beginning of the original but i think you repeated it too much and should have added more beats.
CCC
This piece is really simple, but clean. I really like your choice of song! The only two things I think needs more work are the time in which each note is played and the plain-ness of it. This piece sounds a little messy, in the sense that the notes were not spaced evenly, and in the original song, there is a lot of other instruments and sounds played in the background-try adding some of those! Either way, I really enjoyed listening to your piece, and the title gave me a good laugh!
luz-johnson3991
It sounds like the song, it should have more parts, but its nice.
Shaima
The song has a good beat but it is repetitive. How did you both work on the same song? Good work overall.