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Lantz Beatz
about 9 years ago

Good start, Jacob. Your A section is clear and works pretty well, but I would probably cut it shorter in each of the A sections. Your B section sounds more like four different sections...I'd pick the part you like best and make it longer. Simple is better! Your C section works, but could use a little something else, maybe a melody line (synth or instrument part)? Try a couple things and see what you like best. Good luck!

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