You have made an excellent series of loops here. The problem is that you haven't made them fit together into a flowing song. Now I would advise you to make them flow more smoothly. The transitions are abrupt, basically. I'm telling you this because I think you do have talent, and if you work on this song, you can make really respectable music. You may also want to publish your work to groups to get more views and feedback.
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Miles Findlay
You have made an excellent series of loops here. The problem is that you haven't made them fit together into a flowing song. Now I would advise you to make them flow more smoothly. The transitions are abrupt, basically. I'm telling you this because I think you do have talent, and if you work on this song, you can make really respectable music. You may also want to publish your work to groups to get more views and feedback.
Athom77
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