empty. i'd also like to hear more of a changeup in sound design and melody next time. it gets repetitive rather quickly. overall very interesting concept, i think you could have capitalized on it a bit more and make it even better. keep going with the experimental stuff, i like what you're doing!
interesting! you should work on your structure and transitions more. the kick at 0:14 feels out of place, same with the snare when it comes in later. it's like you need a main melody or chorus right there. the buildup has no warning, you need to make a nice transition into it next time. there's no impact at the drop either, it's all kind of sudden. the whole song really mashes together, i wish it was a bit easier to tell one section from another. it also sounds like you only have six or seven channels going on, you gotta add as many layers as possible. even though it's experimental, it's quite
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overdoze
thanks guys :)
Foresight
empty. i'd also like to hear more of a changeup in sound design and melody next time. it gets repetitive rather quickly. overall very interesting concept, i think you could have capitalized on it a bit more and make it even better. keep going with the experimental stuff, i like what you're doing!
Foresight
interesting! you should work on your structure and transitions more. the kick at 0:14 feels out of place, same with the snare when it comes in later. it's like you need a main melody or chorus right there. the buildup has no warning, you need to make a nice transition into it next time. there's no impact at the drop either, it's all kind of sudden. the whole song really mashes together, i wish it was a bit easier to tell one section from another. it also sounds like you only have six or seven channels going on, you gotta add as many layers as possible. even though it's experimental, it's quite
DUTCH
This percussion is cool.
Dead Dave
This is really cool and experimental