Good work! I really like your A section, it was clear and well put together. The second time I hear it, though, sounds like a synth line is missing, make sure to make it exactly the same as the first and last A section. Your B section works pretty well, but in your C section, you use the synth line that is also in your A section. Delete it, and choose something completely different as your melody. Nice work, try to tweak this for your final project.
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Lantz Beatz
Good work! I really like your A section, it was clear and well put together. The second time I hear it, though, sounds like a synth line is missing, make sure to make it exactly the same as the first and last A section. Your B section works pretty well, but in your C section, you use the synth line that is also in your A section. Delete it, and choose something completely different as your melody. Nice work, try to tweak this for your final project.
Pickle4455
awesome
elite_whetzel3
thanks logan
the turtle
long pause but it was amazing