Good combination of different types of sounds including rhythms, melodies and bass line. 00:42 the melody was a bit sudden as compared to the front part as the change in volume as too much. Ending was too sudden as well. Suggestion: Continue the energy level from the beginning till 00:38 so that there is no sudden change in volume. Or, add another part that can match the high energy at 00:38 before the new melody at 00:42. Work on the ending as well.
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tanwensiu
Good combination of different types of sounds including rhythms, melodies and bass line. 00:42 the melody was a bit sudden as compared to the front part as the change in volume as too much. Ending was too sudden as well. Suggestion: Continue the energy level from the beginning till 00:38 so that there is no sudden change in volume. Or, add another part that can match the high energy at 00:38 before the new melody at 00:42. Work on the ending as well.