Melody and rhythm match well in the beginning, could perhaps be slightly longer before transiting into the next section.
New melody at 00:15 is a little awkward, check so that it starts on beat 1 or beat 5 (multiples of 4) so that listener can follow/clap along as they listen to the song. Match the ending of the rhythm with the coming in of the new melody at 00:15 and 00:16. Check the beats (multiples of 4) at 00:24 as well for the new rhythm coming in. Work on the ending as well, perhaps extend the sound for another repeat (one more loop).
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tanwensiu
Melody and rhythm match well in the beginning, could perhaps be slightly longer before transiting into the next section. New melody at 00:15 is a little awkward, check so that it starts on beat 1 or beat 5 (multiples of 4) so that listener can follow/clap along as they listen to the song. Match the ending of the rhythm with the coming in of the new melody at 00:15 and 00:16. Check the beats (multiples of 4) at 00:24 as well for the new rhythm coming in. Work on the ending as well, perhaps extend the sound for another repeat (one more loop).