thanks and ye i suppose it was kind of like that
Were you intending to make a "mix-tape" sort of vibe out of this particular track? If so, you did a great job there. On the flip side, you might want to work with the sampling a bit. Ergo - using drums and percussion that match with the melodies of the track itself. At 1:33 in, the beat sounds out of place and does not match the rhythm and pace of the track. Other than that, not bad, if this is your first attempt working with samples and/or your own composition/work.