Use of different melodic sounds, good choice as the sounds match in terms of speed and pitch.
00:15 transition into the next section a bit awkward as there is sudden thinning of texture (suddenly not much sound left) and the melody was left unfinished.
Suggestion: As you work on the rest of the song, introduce rhythms to have more variety of sounds. 00:15 perhaps the melody could be continued and finished before the next section, or let the sounds before 00:15 fade out one by one, or end the sounds before 00:15 one by one.
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tanwensiu
Use of different melodic sounds, good choice as the sounds match in terms of speed and pitch. 00:15 transition into the next section a bit awkward as there is sudden thinning of texture (suddenly not much sound left) and the melody was left unfinished. Suggestion: As you work on the rest of the song, introduce rhythms to have more variety of sounds. 00:15 perhaps the melody could be continued and finished before the next section, or let the sounds before 00:15 fade out one by one, or end the sounds before 00:15 one by one.