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Ms. Lantz
about 4 years ago

Good start! I'd keep your A section the way it is, but cut the second part of the B section. Make the first part of the B section a little longer, and add a rhythm sound (drums, bongos, beats, that kind of thing). Your C section also needs a drum part, and I'd make it shorter as well. Don't forget to put one final A section at the end after your C section. Good luck!