Well, improving is what I've been trying, but it seems that I can't do that by myself. Although, I do have to point out something. If you have heard a 6-minute intro, come talk to me about long intros.
The intro is pretty repetitive and bland in general. Although I can see some of the ideas behind the sound design and transitions such as the filter automation at 00:39, the introduction still drags out far too long. The climax is also very disappointing. It literally just sounds like the melody consists of random notes placed in a basic rhythmic fashion. Places like 2:20 sound like you used a very strange synth, or automated some parameter for no reason. I suggest to improve, try to set a chord progression and a bass line for you music, so there is some melodic aspect.
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Cartsoul
Well, improving is what I've been trying, but it seems that I can't do that by myself. Although, I do have to point out something. If you have heard a 6-minute intro, come talk to me about long intros.
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The intro is pretty repetitive and bland in general. Although I can see some of the ideas behind the sound design and transitions such as the filter automation at 00:39, the introduction still drags out far too long. The climax is also very disappointing. It literally just sounds like the melody consists of random notes placed in a basic rhythmic fashion. Places like 2:20 sound like you used a very strange synth, or automated some parameter for no reason. I suggest to improve, try to set a chord progression and a bass line for you music, so there is some melodic aspect.
Cartsoul
That's because I made myself disappear, for a couple of reasons.
Noah
holy shnizzle frackers, its been a while since Ive seen you :000