Love your intro into your A section! Try moving the rhythm in that section around so that it fits better with the rest of the sound (make sure the tempos are the same). Your B section works out ok, but I might try using a different bass line. Right now that one you have seems to be competing for attention with the melody. Your C section is great! Try the changes mentioned and see me if you need help. Good luck!
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Lantz Beatz
Love your intro into your A section! Try moving the rhythm in that section around so that it fits better with the rest of the sound (make sure the tempos are the same). Your B section works out ok, but I might try using a different bass line. Right now that one you have seems to be competing for attention with the melody. Your C section is great! Try the changes mentioned and see me if you need help. Good luck!