Ms. Lantz
about 4 years ago

Great start! There are two things I would change: first, there is a LOUD synth line pulsing through the entire piece...cut it! It covers up all the hard work you've put into this and I think it would be better without it. Lastly, add a beat or rhythm to each section (drum sounds!) to make your A, B, and C that much better. Try my fixes, I think you'll like the result.